『科』In to the World of Game

小青露

嘗試用英文寫很不錯xD"
多接觸一些英文小說會有很多幫助的!!
有些tips像
"full of anger"可以改成"trembling with anger"會比較有動態感
", taking out his sword"用"unsheathing his sword"會比較好
到時候更熟悉可以用更有深度的詞: "he didn't believe it"可以寫成"he didn't buy it"
形容詞是很重要的一環，例如"he glanced at me"可以修成"he glanced at me with his somber blue eyes"
諸如此類，希望這有幫助，也期待下一篇作品出來~~

@白醬
剛剛看了還不錯，除了敘述外，白醬去加強形容的部份一定會變得更棒!!
貓戰士英文用詞有深度，很值得讀唷!! 相信白醬會越來越厲害的 XD"
語法錯誤應該還好，多讀多寫就會漸漸好起來的!